Thursday 3 June 2021

Poem - Winter


 

22 comments:

  1. I enjoyed my time in Room 23. It was great to collect words, share ideas and create this poem together. Ka pai Room 23 - you can be super proud of this poem.

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  2. Kia Ora, I liked our winter poem because it fully describes winter, the weather and how the character is feeling. So that's what I think of our winter poem!

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  3. I really enjoyed this poem because it has lots of ideas. I came up with the steaming hot chocolate line with the marshmellows. My favourite line is freezing cold and foggy when I look outside is a storm coming?. Blog you later!. Castiel

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  4. Hello i really liked our poem we done and how spent lots of time on .

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  5. I really enjoyed having fun with Miss Whysall. I really enjoyed making the poem it has a lot of ideas and big words. I came in with the squishy marshmellows. I wish we can have snow in Aucland.

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  6. KIA Ora, I loved our winter poem because all the words describes everything you do in winter or what you want to do in winter. Byeee.
    -Tupou

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  7. I think that room 23's poem was great because it really does describe winter!
    What do you think about this poem?

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  8. Hello yeah I really liked that poem it was cool and we got to write the ideas we wanted on a bit of scrap paper it was really fun and I hope we do it again bye.

    Rawinia room 23.😊

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  9. Ohayō gozaimasu! I liked our winter poem because the way we all described what we do in winter, what we eat in winter and the weather was really interesting and convincing. I'm really proud of Room 23 this year!

    Sayonara!
    -ALOFA

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  10. I enjoyed doing the poem with Mrs Whysall when we collect words, shareing ideas that was fun.

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  11. wow room 23 Im so proud of the work that we did

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  12. Kia Ora Ebad here I think our poem is awesome it took some time and effort and i'm very proud of it thats all I have to say goodbye.

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  13. I really enjoyed this poem I also helped but a lot of other people helped as well so I can't say that I only did it. It was kinda like a whole class project but six people only helped a little bit because they had to do something out of school.

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  14. Kia ora room 23. I loved the poem we made because it describes everything and what we do in winter. If you made a poem what would it be about? Blog ya later!!!

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  15. I enjoyed making a Winter poem with Ms Whysall because it had a lot of facts that maybe could actually happen in the future but instead of your brother winning you could win the snowball fight with your older brother or little brother but yeah it was really fun to make a poem with a different teacher.

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  16. I really liked how we did a poem all together it was fun making it we all had to agree and disagree.

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  17. I enjoyed making this poem with Miss Whysall because we got to plan the poem with a group and use very describing words in this poem. Thank you Miss Whysall for helping us, you are awesome at making poems! If you could make a poem what would it be based on?
    Blog you later,
    Dayelle;]

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  18. I loved makeing this poem it was so fun! I am so proud of this poem and there is no part of this poem I don't love.
    -Sariya

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  19. I enjoyed making this poem because when we did the poem with miss whysall because we had lot's of facts and ideas

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  20. I like they poem and me and Ebad we said Freeing and foggy at winter drinking hot chocolate with our bother and mum and dad and it was good.

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  21. I really like it how ms whysall was our teacher for a day and I also like it how she came up with a lot of ideas to create a interesting poem and some help from room 23.

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  22. Kia Ora Room 23,

    Great job on making this poem!
    You guys probably had a very fun day with Ms Whysall teaching in your class!

    Blog ya later!

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